I transcribed your voice memo: 2-bar pattern — heavy kick bar, then a stutter + hi-hat roll bar, snare on the 3, all on your harmony bed and glued into one space.
Snare + groove + blend: nailed. The one thing that’s close-but-not-exact is your kick energy — your beatbox has a more driving, aggressive syncopation than I fully caught (transcribing an exact beatbox blind has limits).
You made the beatbox, so you know exactly what’s off. Tell me — more kicks? harder? move the stutter? — or re-do the kick part of the memo slower and I’ll match it tighter. Then hats/details.